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I expect that during this summer I can not only learn from the lesson but also broaden my horizon and know some people from anywhere.

I expect that this Summer I will not only learn from the lessons but also broaden my horizons and meet people from all over/everywhere.

Didn't want to withhold you what great view I'm having, so that's why you only see me from behind;)

I didn’t want to block the great view, so that’s why you only see me from behind.

I hate bugs, however. I know it’s unreasonable but I just can’t get rid of my scare of bugs.

I hate bugs, however. I know it’s unreasonable but I just can’t get rid of my fear of bugs.

As I mentioned in the class I like to play squash, that's the strange game with rubber ball inside glass cube.

As I mentioned in class I like to play squash, that's the strange game with a rubber ball inside a glass enclosure / room.

My another hobby is to walk around and see all the beautiful natures or artificial things.

My other hobby is to walk around and appreciate the beautiful nature or man-made things.

My major isn't determined yet, because my school makes me choose my major when sophomore to give me more opportunities.

I haven’t chosen a major yet because my school allows us to choose when we are sophomores to give us more opportunities.

Also, I like listening to old music like beatles or that kinds of musics.

Also, I like listening to older music like the Beatles or similar kinds of music.

As I spoke in the last class, my major is Chinese language and literature.

As I mentioned…

So, if I don't have an allergy to animal hair and raise my dog, I want to take a walk with my dogs.

So, if I didn’t have an allergy to animal hair, I would have a dog and would want to take it for walks.

I want to study in America two years later to get my master degree.

I want to study in America two years from now to get my master’s degree.